hamaare darmiyaaN ab dooriyaaN haiN
Sep 24, 2007 My Urdu Poems, Poetry
My first nazm ever…. oh it was so much easier writing nazm than writing a Ghazal, it seems that the idea flows far better (at least in my case, that’s what happened) and the nazm just “happened” quickly, while I take my own sweet time when I write Ghazals. Regardless, here’s my first nazm entitled:
hamaare darmiyaaN ab dooriyaaN haiN
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shab-e-furqat hai…
aur maiN sochtaa houN
hamaare darmiyaaN jo qurbateiN thiiN
vo kab aur kaise rukhsat ho gayiiN haiN
muhabbat ke vo dil-aavez naghme
vo baaheiN, vo nigaaheiN, vo ishaare
na jaane kab paraaye ban gaye sab
faqat aazurdagii hi rah gayii hai
hamaare darmiyaaN ab dooriyaaN haiN
shab-e-furqat hai…
aur maiN sochtaa houN
vo paimaan-e-vafaa sab jhooT thaa kyaa?
vo duzdeedah adaa sab jhooT thii kyaa?
vo andaaz-e-muhabbat jhooT the kyaa?
vo ulfat se bhare Khat, jhooT the kyaa?
vo sab kuchh kis tarah maiN bhool jaaouN?
faqat afsurdagii hii rah gayii hai
hamaare darmiyaaN ab dooriyaaN haiN
mujhe Khalvat meiN tanhaa chhoR kar tum
na jaane kis jahaaN meiN kho gayii ho
bhalaa maiN is sulagte dasht meiN ab
kahaaN paaouNgaa vaisii raahateiN jo
tumhaare gesuuoN kii chhaaNv meiN thiiN
shab-e-furqat hai aur maiN sochtaa houN
kabhii tumko bhi mujhse raabita thaa
magar ab to…
hamaare darmiyaaN bas dooriyaaN haiN
(August 5th 2006)
Tags: my poetry, nazm, urdu poetry




November 12th, 2008 at 6:15 am
mujh ko khilvat main chor kar tum…..wah wah…..ye wo samje jo sache dil se mohabbat kare…magar ye rangeen dunyaaaaaa …. or matlabi dunya….
November 12th, 2008 at 6:18 am
Hum jise gun guna nahi sakte……
Waqt ne aisa geet kyun gaya….